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范文8及点评：

I want to invent a special machine

 In modern life we have many inventions which have made great influence on us. They can work out various problems millions of times faster than a person can. As for me, I want to invent a special machine which can help us to cope with the rubbish. Due to the badly polluted environment, it is quite difficult for us to breathe fresh air and drink clean water. Therefore, if I can invent the machine, I hope that it will change the rubbish into some kind of fertilizer, and help the crops grow fast. The above problem would be solved. I am looking forward to realizing my expectation of my machine.

——来自中考英语郭芳老师

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：定语从句修饰各种发明物

亮点二：have a great influence on sb. 固定短语

亮点三：work out…表达解决各种问题，使用恰当

亮点四：定语从句修饰修饰此发明，言简意赅

亮点五：固定句型：it is + adj. +for sb. to do sth.

亮点六：look forward to doing结尾表达美好期待

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