2015年上海中考英语考试已于今日上午圆满落幕，今年的中考英语作文题目为“I want to invent_______(我想发明__________)”。上海新东方优能中学英语教师已于第一时间做出作文解析，并提供相应范文。更多2015上海中考消息，敬请关注上海新东方优能中学！

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范文3及点评：

I want to invent a kind of medicine

If you ask me what I want to invent? I will say a kind of medicine which can cure cancer.As we all know, many people suffer from cancer and die at a very young age these years. For this, countless families lost their beloved family members, then feel painful for the rest of their lives. What a terrible thing it is! So, doing something quickly for them is rather necessary, I’d like to devote my life to it!

——来自中考英语任瑞蕊老师

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：条件状语从句，主将从现，引出中心思想。

亮点二：at a very young age 在年轻时。

亮点三：beloved 挚爱的。

亮点四：for the rest of their lives 余生。

亮点五：What a terrible thing it is! 感叹句表达这种病的严重性。

亮点六：So, doing something quickly for them is necessary! 主语从句结尾，句式新颖，点明主题。

亮点七： devote one’s life to … 把…献给，强烈表明作者的决心。

教师简介：

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