2015年上海中考英语考试已于今日上午圆满落幕，今年的中考英语作文题目为“I want to invent_______(我想发明__________)”。上海新东方优能中学英语教师已于第一时间做出作文解析，并提供相应范文。更多2015上海中考消息，敬请关注上海新东方优能中学！

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范文4及点评：

I want to invent healthy cigarette

       There are a great number of people who smoke around us, including women and men, even some students. As we all know, a cigarette can contain plenty of toxic materials which are not only harmful to themselves, but also to others. Therefore,I think it is necessary to invent healthy cigarette. If people use it when they want to smoke, it can be used to reduce the bad influence which is caused by the real cigarette.

   For our beautiful future and human beings, healthy cigarette should be made.

When I grow up, I want to be an inventor. Healthy cigarette will be my first invention.

——来自中考英语米萌老师

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：考纲外语法定语从句使用

亮点二：not only…but also 不但…而且…

亮点三：宾语从句

亮点四：if条件状语从句

亮点五：When引导的时间状语从句

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