2015年上海中考英语考试已于今日上午圆满落幕，今年的中考英语作文题目为“I want to invent_______(我想发明__________)”。上海新东方优能中学英语教师已于第一时间做出作文解析，并提供相应范文。更多2015上海中考消息，敬请关注上海新东方优能中学！

 2015中考语文作文解析丨2015中考物理题型解析丨2015中考英语作文范文解析 | 2015中考数学题型解析

 最新2015年上海中考专题-试卷分析丨录取分数线（持续更新）

范文7及点评：

I want to invent a flying car

It is not uncommon to meet traffic problems and serious air pollution in big city.It is a must to have a plan to improve the serious condition.

I get an idea to design my own flying machine like a car which can drive well in the street as well as fly between the high rises to avoid the traffic jam. What’s more, when it is moving ,it can transform the motion energy into electricity to drive the engine. Thus, it is possible to save a lot of fuel and reduce the air pollution. It is of great useto solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution ,and even save the natural resource.

Bright idea can only be achieved with the determination and courage. I believe my idea will turn a new leaf of future life.

——来自中考英语左丽娜老师

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：高分短语

亮点二：it is a must 活用高频词

亮点三：定语从句描述自己设计的汽车

亮点四：高分短语

亮点五：be of great use 名词结构更高端

亮点六：被动语态，丰富句式

亮点七： turn a new leaf of future life 翻开未来生活的新篇章

教师简介：

左丽娜  >>查看该教师课程

教研组长; 8年英语教学经验；新东方集团年度优秀教师；新东方集团教师大赛中考组第一名;新教师培训师；近年中考毕业班平均分140分。