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范文5及点评：

I want to invent a robot

Currently, there is a growing awareness that students have a lot of pressure. I want to invent a robot that can help us solve it.

On one hand, it can be regarded as a teacher, that is to say, as long as we are confronted with the problems, we can ask them for help. On the other hand, it enables us to feel relaxed because of the pressure. In other words, it is necessary for us to be faced with the difficulties when it gives us a smile. To calm down helps us to think clearly and make the best decision for us. That’s what I have learnt from its smile.

In a word, the robot not only gives us a helping hand, but also encourages us to discover the power lying within ourselves and achieve our goals.

——来自中考英语李允玥老师

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：定语从句修饰对阐述对现状的焦虑

亮点二：用as long as 引导状语从句，抓人眼球

亮点三：to calm down 非谓语结构

亮点四： a helping hand 词组搭配更高端

亮点五：每句不同词组转换

亮点六：结尾升华

教师简介：

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资深英语讲师，新东方年度优秀教师；新东方上海学校初中英语教材核心编撰者。