托福写作——如何更好添加例子

　　3.另一些悲惨的艺术家

　　伦勃朗Rembrandt, 维梅尔Vermeer (荷兰黄金时期的两个大师，手法创新，在光影表现上都有独到之处。都不受同时代人重视，很符合大家心目中艺术家的Stereotype，可以用来替换梵高、毕加索这类妇孺皆知的大佬)

　　Rembrandt(艺术成就上比Vermeer高点)

　　Rembrandt, Dutch baroque artist, who ranks as one of the greatest painters in the history of Western art. His work made an enormous impact on his contemporaries and influenced the style of many later artists. Perhaps no painter has ever equaled Rembrandt's chiaroscuro effects or his bold impasto.

　　Vermeer(不知道大家看过《戴珍珠耳环的女孩》girl with a pearl earring吗，就是说他的，不过故事是假的，Vermeer的日子可能比电影里更惨)

　　Jan Vermeer reputed the greatest painter besides Rembrandt in Dutch Golden Age, had a marvelous ability in expressing lights and shadow, but he died young left his family no legacy but deep debt. During his lifetime, he had not sold one piece of his paintings. After his death Vermeer did not receive attention until the late 19th century. His reputation steadily increased thereafter, and today he is considered one of the greatest Dutch painters.

　　4.跨专业的牛人

跨专业领域,outsider achievement的文章很适用

艺术》数学

　　M.C. Escher (艾舍尔，就是画图形渐变、现实中不存在的空间的画的人，很牛，也很神经质，他只上过中学，作品却很受数学家推崇。)

　　Dutch M.C Escher leaps from art to mathematics. Escher had no formal mathematical training beyond secondary school, but his fantastic print works, such as Escher Limit Cycle and Day and Night, are most greatly admired by mathematicians, who recognized his work an extraordinary visualization of mathematics principles, and considered him a part of them.

　　数学》艺术

　　分性艺术创始人，IBM研究院搞数学、物理的，结果创造出了新的艺术形式，分形艺术。

　　Benoit Mandelbort was a scientist at IBM Watson Research Center. On his retirement from IBM, he joined the Yale Department of Mathematics. By now, you can tell any connections between him and art. Nonetheless, he has created a new geometry of nature called fractal that is centered in physics and mathematics, and being reputed as a innovative form of art. The explanation is that artist and scientist are expressing in distinct methods but journeying the same destination, such as balance, harmony, symmetry, and the like.

　　5.现代与创新的结合

　　就是大家都很了解的设计中银大厦，卢浮宫金字塔的老贝，这里引用的是卢浮宫的例子。

　　Louvre, national art museum of France.

　　Chinese-born American architect I. M. Pei designed this controversial glass pyramid (completed in 1989) at the entrance to the Louvre, a museum in Paris, France. Noted for his unique arrangements of geometric shapes, Pei also earned a reputation for his creative use of space, surfaces, and materials. One of the foremost architects of the 20th century, Pei has designed important public and corporate buildings throughout the world and has worked with urban renewal.

五、托福写作例子精选

1. Some people think that human needs for farmland， housing， and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view？ Why or why not？ Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Disagree.

1) Endangered animals are valuable because of their limited quantities

2) Environment balance

3) Endangered animals sometimes stand for the country， so they are more valuable than farmlands

2. What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today？ Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Communication skill

1) Other people could understand you better.

2) Create friendly environment and make more friends.

3. Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities？ Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

1) dangerous=challenge. Winner of dangerous sports or other dangerous activities are the stronger. Dangerous sports can give them self-satisfaction.

2) Exciting： tedious daily life needs some change

3) Make money (or Become famous)

4. Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer？ Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Prefer to travel with a companion.

1) Have someone to share the excitement and enjoyment

2) During traveling， you and your companion can help take care of each other if needed.

5. Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer？ Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Get up early.

1) More energetic

2) match team work

3) healthy balance

6. What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter？ Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture？ Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

1) Respect the parents and the elders；

　2) Don't make trouble for the family； Friendly；

3) Hardworking

7. Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer？ Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

For a large company：

1) More promotion opportunities， promising future

2) Stable working situation， good benefits， stable family

3) Working for a large company is an honor.

8. People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work？ Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.

1) Use your knowledge

2) Learn from the work

3) Realize personal value

9. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？ Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication， such as letters， email， or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Disagree：

1) Letter， email or phone calls reduce cost

2) Some words should not be said by face to face

50. Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer？ Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Try new things and take risks

1) Compare these two：

* Only do what we already do well---- boring

* Try new things and take risks ----- exciting

2) Trying new things bring more opportunities

3) Risks means more profit. It is worthy to take reasonable risks.