托福写作笔记

一、写作细节

1.Main point如何确立？

根据题库可将作文题目分成四类：

1.1A+-型：一个事物的正负面影响

Example 154

Hook Imp + contro

Bridge Parents and educators find themselves constantly confrontment with the question, “are……问题？”

A+ MP I believe the answer is yes.

A+1 Provide incentives

A+2 Improve on weaknesses

A+3

Con

A- MP I believe the answer is no.

A-1 Create excessive stress

A-2 Harm all around development

A-3

Con

A+>A- MP I believe the answer is a qualified yes, despite some negative consequences, scores often far more benefit.

A+1

A+2

A-1

A->A+ MP I believe the answer is a qualified no, despite some benefit consequences, scores often far more negative.

A+>A-/A-.A+；although; despite the fact that; despite.

Example:

Although/despite the fact that it gives rise to problems and challenges, A brings greater benefits.

Despite some problems and challenges, A brings greater benefits.

Example 144

A+- MP I believe the answer is yes and no. scores are mixed blessings.

On the one hand

A+ on the one hand, scores encourages students to study harder.

A+1.

A+2…

On the other hand

A- on the other hand, scores can have negative consequences.

A-1

A-2…

Example 74

Hook Imp + contro

Bridge 设问

A- MP I agree with this opinion.

A-1 Harms health

A-2 Impacts learning

A-3 Leads to rises in crimes

Con

A+ MP I disagree with this opinion.

A+1 Disseminate inter

A+2 Enhance learning

A+3 Improve friendship

Con

A->A+ MP Basically (Essentially), I agree with this opinion. Although it offers some benefits, television has far more negative impacts.

A-1

A-2

A+1

A+- MP I believe television is a mixed blession.

On the one hand, A+

On the one hand, A-

Case by case MP My stance should be determined on a case by case basis.

Educational programs promote the development of adolescents.

Case1 Discovery series —scientific facts and theories

Case2 Family album — language learning

Inappropriate or indecent programs have harmful effects.

Case1 Smoking scene —harm health

Case2 Sex and violence content —commit

Con

1.2AB型：两个不同的事物选择

Example 78

A-outdoor; B-indoor

A(1) MP I believe outdoor activities are superior.

A+1 Enjoy a congenial environment.

A+2 Have more physical activities.

A+3 Exciting and thrilling. (bungee jumping)

Con

A(2) MP

A+1

A+2

B-1 Undermine health.

A(3) MP Although indoor activities have their merits, I believe outdoor activists are superior because they have greater benefits.

A+1

A+2

B+1

B(1) MP Indoor activities are better choices.

B+1 Convenient

B+2 Comfortable

B+3 Safe

Con

B(2) MP Indoor activities

B+1

B+2

A-1 Dangerous

Con

B(3) MP Although outdoor activities have their merits, I believe indoor activists are superior because they have greater benefits.

B+1

B+2

A+1

Con

Case by case MP The answer to that question should be determined on a case by case basis.

In many cases, outdoor activities are better choices.