托福写作模板（五）

　　2、托福写作模板：结尾段写作模板

　　In summary, the conclusion reached in this argument is in valid and misleading. To make the argument more convincing, the arguer would have to prove that_____. Moreover, I would suspend my judgment about the credibility of the recommendation until the arguer can provide concrete evidence that_____. Otherwise, the arguer is simply begging the question throughout the argument.

　　To conclude, the argument is not persuasive as it stands. Before we accept the conclusion, the arguer must present more facts that_____. To solidify the argument, the arguer would have to produce more evidence concerning____.

　　As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned. To make it logically acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that ____. Additionally, the arguer must provide evidence to _____.

　　To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer maintains. To strengthen the argument the arguer would have to provide more evidence concerning that_____.

　　In conclusion, the arguer fails to _____. To strengthen the argument, the arguer would have to provide evidence that____. To better evaluate the argument, we need more information about that____.

四、托福综合写作模板：金融危机

　　托福综合写作模板：According to some economists, a financial crisis is an unavoidable event for the global market and it happens every several years as a result of long-term economic development. During the recession, multiple social issues such as the unemployment rate, the price of commodities and even the investment in public service are affected in an adverse way. Our entire society is negatively impacted and it is the responsibility of our government to introduce solutions to these social issues. Normally, increasing investment in areas like the green industry will provide a boost in the economy as well as help with sustainable development. By upgrading the technology of environmental protection, people will not only benefit from an increase in job positions, but they will also have the chance to enjoy better living conditions as well.

　　（一）、单词和词组

　　1、unavoidable 不可避免的=inevitable

　　Once athletes start their sports career, intensive training is unavoidable.

　　2、sustainable development 可持续发展

　　The use of land is of essential importance to the survival of mankind and the sustainable development of modern society.

　　（二）句型结构

　　By …, … 通过= … by …

　　(1) By emphasizing the first-class quality of the products, advertisers attempt to leave a better impression on the potential buyers.

　　(2)Advertisers attempt to leave a better impression on the potential buyers by emphasizing the first-class quality of the products.

　　（三）适用考题

　　In times of an economic crisis, in which area should the government reduce its spending? a. libraries b. public transportation c. police.