托福写作——综合写作

   Writing Sample 2 （OG -- 255）

   1、先认真读完一篇满分范文

   2、再用笔划掉其中涉及题目具体内容的部分

   3、最后把余下来的部分抄写下来即可

   再看一篇：

   Getting the Templates

   The first point the professor makes that casts doubt on the reading is his point about the behavior of stags. The professor shows how the actions of animal can be interpreted in different ways. For example, some people interpret the stag's actions as being for the "good of the species," but the professor shows that the stag is actually acting in self-interest. This casts doubt on the reading because it appears that the crickets' behavior can be interpreted as helping only individual crickets and not the group as a whole. The professor then talks about the results of the experiment, which seems to indicate the crickets are acting only in self-interest.

   Another point the professor makes that casts doubt on the reading is his point about the intelligence of animals and insects. As he states, it would seem to require a lot of intelligence to evaluate how a behavior will affect an entire species. This makes the explanation in the reading seem less likely; a cricket is probably unable to think of the consequences of its actions. It is more likely that the cricket is only acting out of self-preservation, as the professor indicates.

   提取的模版：

   The first point the professor makes that casts doubt on the reading is his point about ____________.The professor shows that ________________________.For example, ______________________, but the professor shows that ________________________.This casts doubt on the reading because it appears that_________________________________. The professor then talks about_______________, which seems to indicate that__________________.

   Another point the professor makes that casts doubt on the reading is his point about ______________.As he states, it would seem to___________________________. This makes the explanation in the reading seem less likely; _____________________________.It is more likely that________________________, as the professor indicates.

   提取模版之后，要学会如何往里面填空，实际上最简单的方法就是看着题目把具体内容自己填进去，然后跟范文对比，找出填空的精华技巧所在，大家如果想在今后新托福的考试中作文部分有所突破，那么就应该按照这个提取模版的方法，去至少提炼20篇左右的满分范文，再加以有机排列组合成自己独特的考试模版，最后进行集中填空，那么新托福综合写作高分不是神话。

　　The lecturer claims that ...( 可用个从句 比如 the new policy, which ...., will  ..)

　　This claim is not in agreement with that of the reading passage, which  suggests that...

　　First, the lecturer argues that...(according to the lecture,...)

　　This is because ...,(which means... 转述一下).

　　Clearly, the professor's argument disproves it's counterpart in the reading  that...

　　Moreover, the professor believes that... Then he supports this point with  the fact that...(In other words, 转述一下...)

　　This point of view is in marked contrast to the assertion in the reading  passage that...,

　　Finally, regarding xxx(xx话题) the lecturer contends that..

　　He/She proves that this claim is indefensible by pointing out that...

　　This is in direct contradiction with the claim in the reading passage  that...

　　All in all, on the basis of the evidences presented, the professor clearly  identifies the weakness(wrong parts) in the reading passage and forcefully show  that...(主题句) .

　　注意用词的替换， 不要老用because 啊 because of啊 也不只是换成due to啊 还可以先讲目的再讲做法， 比如in order to  , for the sake of 等等。