雅思大作文点评（二）

一、是否应纳税？

　　Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

　　Almost every government around world（应改为around the world） now takes money from its citizens as tax. With such money, they are able to improve the constructions within the countries, and more importantly, they could develop educational, medical and welfare system. It seems that every one(最好还是everyone) will benefit from it. （46words）

　　However, not every one considers such tax system a reasonable one. Many argue that they are pressured by tax, especially in the developed countries where the tax rates are rather high, for comparatively a large portion of their incomes are collected by the governments. For example, it’s quite common in such countries that the amount of the tax collected from the husband’s income is as much as the wife’s total income. I believe most women would rather choose to stay at home if there is no income tax which is so high. (92words)