托福作文提高

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托福写作避免生搬硬套，要把学到的句式和词组灵活运用到自己的写作当中去!这样，写作的分数自然也就提高啦!

增加过渡段：

A1 好。。。

A1 好，而且 A2 好。(这个“而且”，可以用科技发展啊技术进步啊之类的扩充)

A2 好。。。

14 条万能理由：

与事物有关：效率、方便、经济、耐久、安全、空间。

与人有关：健康、乐趣、成就、性格、情感、交流、经验、他人。

理由的安排也要有逻辑顺序—首段要雕琢，要表现!

1、排比反问：

Have you ever been to the West Lake in Hangzhou City? Have you ever walked along the Long Corridor in the Summer Palace? Have you ever seen the red fallen leaves on the Fragrance Hill?

If you have never had such experiences, you would never know how much fun outdoor activities could bring you.

2、背景知识式：

With the development of science and technology, more and more companies (including international companies and small companies) are founded, but there are not enough people to

take these positions. So a large number of working opportunities are provided to people who are still teenager students.

In some countries, some people think if teenagers do a job while they are still studying in school, it may have a bad impact on their grade. Others consider that teenagers

should have jobs while they are still students. As far as Iam concerned, I agree with the latter.

Because teenagers can learn amount of useful experience through working and they think through the job they will acquire some knowledge of how to get a good relationship with others.

3、定义式：

Technology refers to skills, knowledge, and techniques thathuman beings use in their daily life and work. As everybodymay find, technology develops day by day. How does the development of technology affect our life?

Many people hold the opinion that it is due to the development of technology that human beings have access to the comfortable modern life. On the other hand, a number of people are always aware ofall kinds of destructive influence of the technological development on us. As far as I am concerned, the development of technology does far more good than harm to people’s happiness

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