托福写作官方指南（二）

　　“生如夏花之绚烂，死如秋叶之静美”

　　背景介绍(模版)：

　　Thanks to fast development of computer technolegy , books ,as tradtional medium ,are more and more challenged . Many libaries are faced with a dilemma ,whether they should invest on computers or books. With every aspect taken into consideration I am fully convienced that to invest on computers would be better choice.

　　I hope = I imagine paradise to be a place where …

　　However = the other side of the picture is quite the opposite

　　I feel as if I were waiting for the last bus which never would come … “失望”

　　Though it may be possible to measure the value of techology in term of…,it is extremely difficult to estimate the true value of .

　　Paradox “悖论”

　　Learning the importance of the hard working most of students have already set there own goal.

　　先从汉语上把主语变成一致在判断主语，再用伴随状语

　　说原因为TOEFL的主体

　　For one thing ,it is no exaggerating to say that life full of material has destroyed the people’s goal life

　　For another ,there might be sth wrong with our education.

　　Student have no chance to /fail to think about the pupose of their student , for teachers often teach them not only but how they should.(study)

　　总结段：

　　From my personal angle alone we should / It is better for us to refine our educational system .

　　We should realize the real purpose of study , for paradise is just a place where everyone can have a great aspiration and achieve it by there efforts.

　　(aspriation远大理想)

　　Integrated writing task

　　游戏哲学：

　　阅读--- 听力 --- 写作

　　2.30s 读文章

　　30 s 黄金三十秒

　　听力一定来来源于阅读要么坚持，要么反对 通常为反对

　　写作 ：客观与真实记录听力与阅读的观点矛盾之处

　　30s ：冷静的推断听力的内容观点

　　考察：阅读能力

　　听力能力

　　笔记能力

　　将笔记转化为论文的能力

　　一、评分标准

　　1 选择能力 select the important information

　　2 联系能力 relate this information

　　3 Don’t give you own option

　　4 if all you do is copy words in reading ---- you will recive 0

　　二、阅读&笔记

　　Main ieda

　　Example /reason :

　　Example / reason:

　　Example / reason:

　　找论点 ：

　　1 文章首句通常是话题或论点

　　2 若文章首句是背景介绍或其后出现转折则转向首段末句

　　3 若首句为疑问句，请关注其后面的是非判断

　　4 若段落中出现人名及理论则该理论为观点的重要理论

　　5 若段落中出现例子则其前后论点句和总结句也是重点

　　关键句：

　　1 特殊印刷体或特殊标点符号(引号和括号)

　　2 表明顺序的连词：first second,what is more ….

　　3 表示因果关系的固定搭配： according to + 作者观点

　　4 表明转折的连词：but ,however , yet

　　三、听力 & Noting

　　Main idea

　　Point 1 :

　　Detail 1

　　Point 2

　　Detail 2

　　Point 3

　　Detail 3

　　听力过程中一些值得注意的语言

　　判断： is

　　…is defined as ..

　　The key feature of …is …

　　The main role of …is…

　　One function of …is …

　　Another example is …

　　The main reason for this is …

　　A relate concept is ..

　　因果：

　　… is interesting because…

　　This is primary because …

　　First …second…third …most importantly

　　分类和分组思想的句子：

　　There are there types / kinds / groups / classes of

　　客观准确：听力中最值得注意的是那些能听懂的东西—已知推测未知的能力—逻辑