托福写作经典范文（三）

三、托福写作解析:假设条件句怎么写

　　It is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

　　If a high school student is about to leave school soon, it is necessary for him to have a most suitable plan before the graduation ceremony begins.

　　Teachers should give students homework everyday.

　　If teacher had been checking the students' progress with daily homework assignments, they might not have failed the test.

　　过去的虚拟，把反面的例子变成正面的评论

　　if sb had done, sb might/would have done

　　Traveling alone is better than travelling with a companion.

　　But for the assistance from a companion, travelers would be exposed to more dangers on the way.

　　现在或将来的情况：but for sb/sth, sb would do sth

　　过去的情况： but for sb/sth, sb would have done

四、托福写作解析：托福写作结构与方法

　　应把全篇分为三大部分introduction, development, conclusion，建议把每段的主要观点放在首句，再加分观点，用原因和展开论述去支持你的主要观点。

　　结构：

　　1 Introduction

　　2 Development：1 main idea (+examples, details)

　　2 main idea (+examples, details)

　　3 etc.

　　3 Conclusion: Perhaps a summary of the main points in 2. Own views/opinions and decisions.

　　当然我们需要一些素材来支持我们的观点，好的素材来自于生活或已知的信息，这些素材一定要是合理的。首先，素材要和前面叙述过的主要观点和理由构成因果关系。其次，这些可以想到的素材和例子可以很清楚的描写出来。最后，这些已有的素材可以引起读者的共鸣。

五、托福写作解析：托福写作常用过渡词归纳

　　1.时间或顺序

　　At the same time, as soon as, so far, since, now, when, meanwhile, shortly, later, lately, after a while, at this time, before, earlier, presently, in the meantime, formerly, previously, simultaneously, eventually, finally, concurrently , immediately, subsequently, lastly, consequently, since then, following this, preceding this, at the outset, at this point, after, afterwards, after this, at once, at length, in the mean time, meanwhile, at the same time, in the end, not long after, some time ago, at present, all of a sudden, from this time on.

　　2.阐述说明

　　In other words, again, as has been pointed out, to repeat, as I have said above, once again, after all, indeed, in fact, truly, chiefly, especially, actually, particularly, to be sure, above all, most important of all, even worse, no doubt, needless to say.

　　3.对比

　　but, however, yet, or, nevertheless, still, nonetheless, conversely, nor rather, whereas, though, on the one hand, on the contrary, by contrast with/to, even though, instead, unlike, different from, in contrast (with/to), instead (of), unlike, while, for all of that, notwithstanding, something is just the other way around, opposed to, as opposed to.

　　4.类比

　　similarly, likewise, like, as, at the same time, in fact, too, in the same way, in alike manner, both, also, compared with, in comparison with

　　5.举例及序数词

　　first of all, to begin with, first, second, next, in the first (second) place, furthermore, moreover, beyond that, also, besides, in addition, what is more, such as, finally, for example, for instance, in this case, namely, a case in point is…, consider…, in particular, including…, for one thing…, for another…, put it simply, stated roughly, as an illustration, I will say…, a good example (of…) would be…, to detail this, I would like to…, it is interesting to note that…, in this situation, as proof, take the case of…, take (something) as example, as for, as regards, as to, according to, on this occasion.

　　6.原因和结果

　　Since, because (of), as, for, owing to, result from, due to, on account of, on the ground of, as a result of, being that, another important factor/reason of…, in that…, for the reason that…, in view of.

　　So, therefore, thus, hence, as a result, accordingly, for this reason, on that account, it follows that, thereupon, inevitably, under these conditions, as a consequence, consequently, in consequence, so that, not only…but (also…), so… as to

　　7.总结

　　To sum up, in summary, to summarize, in short, in brief, to be brief, on the whole, in conclusion, to conclude, the conclusion can be drawn that…