托福写作语料库积累（四）

　　9. Therefore，those who receive on-the-job training will become more faithful to the organizations they serve because they can feel the sense of belonging and being valued. 接受在职培训老师们对于所他们服务的企业会更加忠诚，因为他们可以感受到一种归属感，一种被重视的感觉。

　　解析： on-the-job training n 在职培训

　　10. When teachers excel in their specialized knowledge， not only does them become more popular among students, but also it may inspire their creativity and passion in teaching.当老师们精通专业知识的时候，他们不仅仅可以受到学生的欢迎，更加可以鼓励他们的创造力和工作热情。

　　解析：excel in professional knowledge v 精通专业知识

　　11. If teachers’ motivation can be highly stimulated, their dedication to teaching career and spirit of self-improvement will inject new life into the further prosperity of relevant schools. 当老师们教学热情被极大地激发的时候，他们的敬业态度和自我提高的精神会给相关学校的发展注入新鲜的活力。

　　拓展：inject new life into = inject fresh vitality into v 为……注入新鲜活力

　　12. Elementary knowledge are so simple that school teachers needn’t to take trouble to update their knowledge. 基础知识都是很简单的，因此中小学的教育者没有必要专门更新知识。

　　13. Still, on-job training scheme will impose much pressure upon a school economically. 另外，在职培训的计划会给一个学校增加巨大的经济压力。

　　解析：impose much pressure upon a …… economically v 为……增加经济压力

　　14. All school educators should be required to attend relevant training courses to maintain competitive every five years. 所有的教育者应该被要求每五年参加相关的培训以保持竞争力。

　　15. …… can enhance the reputation of a school = …… can make a school enjoy tremendous popularity …… 可以提高一个学校的美誉度。

　　解析：enjoy tremendous popularity v 享有盛誉

　　拓展：tremendous = great adj 极大的

十、托福写作语料库积累：现在比过去更容易接受教育

　　People are now easier to become educated than in the past. Do you agree or disagree 现代人比过去更加容易接受教育，是否认同?

　　托福写作语料库：

　　1. Education is one of the key words of our time，a man without education，man of us believe，is the victim of adversity.教育是我们时代的关键词之一，一人没有受过教育的人，我们很多人认为，是逆境的牺牲者。

　　点评：本句谈及教育的重要性。

　　2. Education has a key role to play in one’s personal growth and a nation’s further development. 教育在个人成长和国家的发展中发挥了重要的重要。

　　解析：has a key role to play in…… 在……方面可以发挥重要的重要

　　3. People differ greatly in their views over whether people are easier to get educated than before. 关于是否人们比过去更加容易接受教育，人们的观点差异很大。

　　4. It seems easier for people to get well-educated in the present day society. 当今社会，似乎人们更加容易接受良好的教育。

　　解析：get well-educated = receive fine education v 接受良好的教育

　　5. The Internet greatly diversifies people’s option of receiving education. 互联网使得人们接受教育的选择更加多元化。

　　解析：diversify = enrich v 使多样化

　　6. With the popularity of on-line education, people could acquire and update knowledge via drawing on rich on-line educatioal resource. 由于网络教育的流行，人们可以通过利用丰富的在线教育资源，学习知识，不断充电。

　　解析：update knowledge v充电(学习)

　　7. Distance education is highly convenient, because learners can be free to take any suitable course through an on-line course selection system. 远程教育高度便利，因为学习者可以通过在线的选课系统，自由选择适合自己的课程。

　　点评：本句还可以对比网络教育以及课堂教育。

　　8. It can effectively surmount geographical barrier and enhance the flexibility of learning，therefore，many learners in remote areas have access to fine teaching resources 网络教育有效地克服了地域的障碍，提高了学习的灵活性，因此，很多偏远地区的学习者也有机会获得良好的教育资源。

　　9. In this sense, distance learning provide people with more opportunities to receive fine education, some special learning group, such as disabled learners, ill students or busy employees, could serve as perfect examples. 因此，远程学习给人们提供了更多的机会去接受良好的教育，一些特殊的学习群体，例如残疾学习者，生病的学生，忙碌的企业职员都是很好接受网络教育的例证。

　　解析：serve as perfect examples 是很好的例证

　　10. In addition to the availability of various cyber educational resources, the state support in education is another stimulating factor that facilitate various education 除了各种在线网络教育资源，国家在教育方面的支持是另外一个因素，对于各种教育提供便利。

　　解析：facilitate v 使容易;有助于……