【托福培训-写作】托福写作备考资料——优秀范文实例汇总(6)

句法组织对与IBT写作能起到非常大的帮助作用，因为一篇写作文法组织得当，用词恰当的文章更能体现一个考生在英语语法方面的掌握能力，更能体现出考生使用英语语言对某一问题和看法阐述自己观点的语言能力和技巧，而IBT写作部分所要考察考生的一个终极目的便是评测考生是否能在英语语言的课堂环境或是学术环境中使用英语写出流利而出色的学术报告的能力，因此考生需要加强对写作中语言能力，尤其是英语句法的学习和把握。

A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

　　New factories often bring many good things to a community, such as jobs and increased prosperity. However, in my opinion, the benefits of having a factory are outweighed by the risks. That is why I oppose the plan to build a factory near my community.

　　I believe that this city would be harmed by a large factory. In particular, a factory would destroy the quality of the air and water in town. Factories bring smog and pollution. In the long run, the environment will be hurt and people’s health will be affected. Having a factory is not worth that rise.

　　Of course, more jobs will be created by the factory. Our population will grow. To accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. Do we really want this much growth, so fast? If our town is going in growth, I would prefer slow growth with good planning. I don’t want to see rows of cheaply constructed townhouses. Our quality of life must be considered.

　　I believe that this growth will change our city too much. I love my hometown because it is a safe, small town. It is also easy to travel here. If we must expand to hold new citizens, the small-town feel will be gone. I mould miss that greatly.

　　A factory would be helpful in some ways. However, I feel that the dangers are greater than the benefits. I cannot support a plan to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.