【托福培训-写作】新托福点评（一）

1.真题回放

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　Physical exercise is much more important for the old than the young.

　　2.名师点评：

　　这是一篇关于健康的话题，我们不妨从不同意该观点的角度来谈，因为人们普遍认为锻炼身体更多的是老人的事情，然而身体的疾病不是从老年开始形成的，而是从我们养成不良生活习惯的那一天就开始了。这样写可以让文章听上去更加合理也更容易展开来写。这里提供一个写作的思路：

　　2.1第一段中，我们要做的工作就是说明题目的背景以及明确的表达自己的立场

　　In the pursuit of health, the old seem to pay much more efforts than the young, you could easily find the grey-headed doing physical exercise in the park, the broad square or any expanse of land in China. But then again, who doesn`t want health? Comparing to the old, in my opinion, the young actually need more physical exercises.

　　2.2第二段阐明锻炼的好处以及疾病往往是从年轻的时候开始积累的

　　The merits of regular physical activity — from preventing chronic health conditions to promoting weight loss and better sleep — are hard to ignore. The fact is that people, especially the young, do not realize the importance of physical exercise until illnesses bother them. Let`s assume an infant grows up in to an old, illnesses grow up along with him/her as well…

　　2.3第三段引用事实或者数据来证明该论点

　　Furthermore, statistical analysis was done by a research group in UK which indicates that the earlier people begin regular physical exercise, the better health condition they will enjoy in adulthood….

　　2.4最后一段自然是总结并且重申自己的观点

　　To sum it up, everyone can gain the health benefits of physical exercise--- as long as you start early, and therefore I would like to say that physical exercise is much more important for the young than the old.