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2016-03-25 17:21
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作者:上海新东方整理
摘要:下面介绍的是新托福综合写作满分答题步骤,供大家参考。
托福写作一共有两篇作文,第一篇作文是综合写作,第二篇作文是独立写作。所谓综合写作就是要求你在3分钟时间浏览一篇材料阅读,然后听一篇材料,这篇材料和刚才看的是一关于一个话题,一般是相悖的观点,然后根据这两篇材料写一篇大概200字的文章。最后你写的作文主要内容就是概括这两篇材料,分别描述它们的观点。说了这么多,就和小编一起来实战吧。我们以2011年12月17日北美新托福考试的综合写作真题为例,
小编将按时间顺序一步步地将同学们带入托福综合写作环境中。
在考试前,考生会看到关于托福综合写作的英文题目说明,大意是要你用3分钟扫读一篇文章然后听一段听力材料,最后用20分钟写一篇150 to 225 words的作文。
接下来屏幕上会出现一篇文章,左下角会出现一个3分钟的倒计时时间显示。考试正式开始。
第一步 扫读文章
Passage:
A recent new
incentive program implemented by a major corporation aims to foster healthy
lifestyles among its workforce. The potential benefits are numerous, though
this article will focus on three of them.
The first benefit
is obvious: the incentives will be a material aid in helping employees quit
smoking and lose weight. The most commonly cited reason for failure to break
bad habits is lack of a support network, because smoking and an unhealthy diet
are quite common. But if an entire workforce is made of non-smokers or people
who eat healthy food, every employee can break their bad habits.
Another powerful
set of incentives for developing good habits is that the company will partially
cover the payment of the insurance for those with healthier lifestyles. In
effect, the amount saved from paying for insurance is a raise in salary. An
added benefit could be offering them additional vacation days.
The third benefit
should accrue to the company. Most workers with a healthy lifestyle are not
absentee workers. Likewise, workers with good health tend to work far more
efficiently. They take no smoke breaks, are less susceptible to nagging coughs
and colds, and generally have more energy than their unhealthy counterparts. In
turn, the company can make more profits and save the health-related costs. All
in all, this incentive program for employees’ health is
a win-win proposition for company and staff alike.
阅读文章时,应注意:
1)进行“扫描式”阅读,把文章主题和每段中心论点快速一扫而过,并随时准备速记重点,切忌“精读”,否则时间不够。
2)把握好每段重点,这可以帮助你从容地推测后面听力材料的要点。这种方式尤其适用于听力不够好的考生。
第二步 记录文章重点
假说
【原文摘要】 3 benefits:
incentive program / healthy lifestyles ← corp~
【笔记转述】 The reading
passage mainly discusses three benefits of an incentive program carried out by
a company to promote healthy lifestyles among its employees.
根据1
【原文摘要】 company → part~ $ → insurance→↑ vacation → healthier
【笔记转述】 For those
with healthier lifestyles, the company will pay part of their insurance and
provide them with additional vacation time.
根据2
【原文摘要】 ×smk & ↓ wgt
【笔记转述】 The first
benefit of the program is to facilitate employees to quickly quit smoking and
lose weight.
根据3
【原文摘要】 health √
→ ↑ 率 →↑ 利 → company
【笔记转述】 Employees
with good lifestyle habits work more efficiently and make more profits for the
company.
记录文章重点时,应注意:
1)重点一般分布在每段的首尾,前后呼应,逻辑性强:段首陈述每段主题,段尾得出结论。
2)笔记重点可按照“假说→假说根据1 →假说根据2 →假说根据3”的模式记录,这也是答题模板,建议大家熟记。在新托福考试听力部分结束后的10分钟休息时间内,考生最好在草稿纸上面先写好这个模板。
3)笔记内容要短而精,切忌抄句子。考生开始写作时,文章会再次出现在题目和答题区旁边。
本文主要讲解如何做好托福综合写作中的阅读素材的步骤和注意点,帮助大家在托福写作考试中把握好答题重点和方法。关于听素材的部分,笔者建议参考托福听力的技巧。
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