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【托福培训-写作】模板—精华素材奥巴马演讲合集

2015-11-03 11:15

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作者:上海新东方整理

万人瞩目的美国总统演讲作文模板大合集,正宗的美国音。把枯燥的理论Pia飞到天边,各位考友快来学习,让自己的托福考试写作分数一飞冲天!


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    每一个模板分为3部分:第一部分是原句,也就是原来这句话是怎么说的。

  第二部分是通过修改而成的模板。这个模板里面的XXXX的部分,是需要你进行替换的。有时需要填上名词,有时需要填上句子,有时需要填上形容词,具体填写什么形式的内容可以通过原句来进行推断,当然老师也在(括号)之中进行了提示。

  第三部分,则是一个小建议,可以用在作文的什么部分,有的可以作文的主题句,有的可以作文的例子

  而有的只能用在特定类型的文章之中。

  这篇模板也是紧追奥巴马的最新演讲,这篇模板里面的所有素材都是取材于奥巴马于2011年4月关于最新的财政政策的最新演讲,绝对的新鲜美味。

  文章编辑方式为第一段是原文,第二段是制造完成的模板。为了保证考友们不会把新托福模板理解错误,以及保证句意的理解,原文也放在了这里,而且力劝每一位考友首先研究原文的含义,然后再使用模板,绝对是事半功倍的选择!

  此次不仅加入了新素材,而且还在很多替换位加入了该替换怎样的内容,绝对帮助各位考友最快速度用到自己的作文中!

  原文:What we’ve been debating here in Washington over the last few weeks will affect the lives of the students here and families all across America in potentially profound ways. This debate over budgets and deficits is about more than just numbers on a page; it’s about more than just cutting and spending. It’s about the kind of future that we want. It’s about the kind of country that we believe in. And that’s what I want to spend some time talking about today.

 模板:What we’ve been debating here in XXXXX over the last XXXXXXXXX will affect the XXXXXXXXX here and XXXXXXXXX all across XXXXXXXX in XXXXXXXXXXX. This debate over XXXXXXXXXX is about more than just numbers on a page; it’s about more than just XXXXXXXXXXXXXX. It’s about the kind of future that we want. It’s about the kind of country that we believe in. And that’s what I want to spend some time talking about today. 超棒的起始段,几乎就是为托福作文准备的。

  原文:But there’s always been another thread running through our history -– a belief that we’re all connected, and that there are some things we can only do together, as a nation. We believe, in the words of our first Republican President, Abraham Lincoln, that through government, we should do together what we cannot do as well for ourselves.

  模板:But there’s always been another thread running through our history -– a belief that XXXXXXXXXXX正面观点, and that there are some things we can only do together, as XXXXXXXX. We believe, in the words of XXXXXXXXXX, (that through XXXXXXXXX词句可以忽略不用), we should do together what we cannot do as well for ourselves. 用于论证段

  原文:Now, for much of the last century, our nation found a way to afford these investments and priorities with the taxes paid by its citizens.

  模板:Now, for much of the XXXXXXXX一段具体时间, XXXXXXX found a way to afford these investments and priorities with the XXXXXXXXX paid by XXXXXXXXX. 用于论证或者举例。

  原文:But as far back as the 1980s, America started amassing debt at more alarming levels, and our leaders began to realize that a larger challenge was on the horizon.

  模板:But as far back as the XXXXXX, XXXXXXXXXXXX started XXXXXXXX at more alarming levels(此处写得妙), and XXXXXXXX began to realize that a larger challenge was on the horizon.(写得好有画面感啊) 用于论证或者举例。

  原文:To meet this challenge, our leaders came together three times during the 1990s to reduce our nation’s deficit — three times.

  模板:To meet this XXXXXXX, somebody do something three times during the XXXXXXX to do something — three times. 用于论证或者举例。

  用于论证或者举例。

  原文:But we have to do it without putting at risk current retirees, or the most vulnerable, or people with disabilities; without slashing benefits for future generations; and without subjecting Americans’ guaranteed retirement income to the whims of the stock market.

  模板:But we have to do it without putting at risk current XXXXXX, or the most vulnerable, or people with disabilities; without slashing benefits for future generations; and without subjecting XXXXXXXX(某国家) guaranteed retirement income to the whims of the stock market.又见奥巴马并列金句!而且模板度超高!

  原文:To give you an idea of how much damage this caused to our nation’s checkbook, consider this: In the last decade, if we had simply found a way to pay for the tax cuts and the prescription drug benefit, our deficit would currently be at low historical levels in the coming years.

  模板:To give you an idea of how much XXXXXXXX this caused to XXXXXXXXX, consider this: In the last decade, if we had simply found a way to XXXXXXXXXX, our XXXXXXXXXX would currently be at XXXXXXXXXXXX historical levels in the coming years. 绝棒的举例句!

  原文:Finally, there are those who believe we shouldn’t make any reforms to Medicare, Medicaid, or Social Security, out of fear that any talk of change to these programs will immediately usher in the sort of steps that the House Republicans have proposed.

  模板:Finally, there are those who believe we should XXXXXXXXX, out of fear that any talk of change to XXXXXXXX(接名词结构)will immediately usher in the sort of steps that the XXXXXXXXX(某人或者某群体) have proposed. HOHOHO观点句的绝品!

  原文:Even after our economy recovers, our government will still be on track to spend more money than it takes in throughout this decade and beyond.

  模板:Even after our XXXXXXXX, XXXXXXXXX will still be on track to spend more money than it takes in throughout this decade and beyond. 用于讨论XXXXXXXX的恢复

  原文:A serious plan doesn’t require us to balance our budget overnight –- in fact, economists think that with the economy just starting to grow again, we need a phased-in approach –- but it does require tough decisions and support from our leaders in both parties now.

  模板:A serious plan doesn’t require us to balance our budget overnight –- in fact, economists think that with the economy doing something, we need a phased-in approach –- but it does require tough decisions and support from XXXXXXXXXX(somebody) now. 超好的关于经济的论证句!

  原文:Above all, it will require us to choose a vision of the America we want to see five years, 10 years, 20 years down the road.

  模板:Above all, XXXXXXXXXXXXXX will require us to choose a vision of the XXXXXXXX we want to see five years, 10 years, 20 years down the road. 超好的托福作文最后一段的总结句。




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