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托福口语模板:艺术和科学选课

2016-04-19 15:48

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作者:上海新东方整理

摘要:托福口语如何备考?托福口语答题思路是什么?下面小编为大家带来托福口语模板:艺术和科学选课,希望给各位带来启发!


托福口语题目:

Which class would you join for fun? Art class or science class.Please give your reasons with details.

托福口语参考范文:

Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me because I'm just the one who has no passion for anything about art. Most of the time, when others are appreciating a great work of art, I will just count when the class will end. Sometimes, I may even have to drink a lot of coffee before the class to prevent myself from falling asleep during the class. By contrast, in the science class, it is so interesting that I hardly feel bored. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid, all of these can spark my interest and I am overwhelmed by tons of the secrets of the cosmos.

托福口语参考答案:

Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me instead of [than] art class because I am the one who likes doesn’t like/ has no passion for things of art. Inthis way, Most of the time, when the others are appreciating a great aunt art work, I will just count how long will the class end the class will last/ when the class will end. Sometimes, I even may/ may even have to take some measures to prevent myself from falling sleep asleep when/ while my classmates are immersed in a passionate work of music art.

However, in the science class, it is so interesting that I can hardly be distracted by the surroundings. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscoverted undiscovered asteroid, all of these got my attention arouse/ spark my interest/ arouse/ spark/ awaken/ pique my curiosity. And I was overwhelmed by tons of secrets of the cosmos.

托福口语模板分析:

请不要把than和rather than相混淆。形容词比较级后边要接的是than,表示“做比较”,如果是rather than = instead of,意思是“而不是”。故可以说:I think A is better than B. 或 I would choose A rather than B. 但是不能串了,I think A is better rather than B.

口误可不行哦!既然观点是:选the science class,那必然是对艺术的事情都不感兴趣咯,所以,这里应该是一个口误(比较严重哦,障碍到了对方的理解)

In this way, 的意思是“依照这种方式,”但是,在这里没有什么方式,所以改成了Most of the time,意思是“大多数时候,”表明这是一种常态

In this way的正确用法示范:I highly recommend that you should join YEEAOO's 晨读团 because in this way, you can not only improve your English, but also make a lot of new friends.

PS: 所以你看,这就是为什么can的否定式,必须写成can't或者cannot(连在一起),因为空格之后完全是不一样的意思哦!这里不是can的否定式cannot(不能够),而是:can not only(不只是能够)!!!

the others这种说法是错误的,如果是the那就是:the other,表示是2者中的另一个(one 和 the other);要么就直接others,很多个里边的其他几个

How long后边是引导的如果是一个简单句的问句, 则will需提前

但如果how long一道的是整个句子的宾语, 那就用正常语序

这里的take some measures to prevent myself from falling asleep:

A. take some measures的说法不够具体:请问,究竟是采取什么样的措施呢?建议改为说某种具体的措施:比如,课前喝超多咖啡,课前用凉水洗脸,上课的时候把老师的脸想象成自己的idol等等~

B. fall + asleep(形容词,作表语,表示“睡着了”的状态)

when/ while my classmates are immersed in a passionate work of music art. 为了确保主谓一致,把classmate改成了classmates(后边是are)同时,因为art class实际上指的是“美术课”,所以不建议说a work of music。PS: work在当“作品”讲的时候,是可数名词哦~所以,这里加a是正确哒~

However, in the science class, it is so interesting that I can hardly be distracted by the surroundings.

A. However, 表示“转折关系”,但是,这里是表示“对比关系”,建议改为“By contrast/ In contrast,”

B. 上文说的是:美术课会让我觉得很想睡觉,很想下课——就是无聊嘛。那么,下面对比的时候,应该是说:科学课让我觉得不无聊。可是can hardly be distracted by the surroundings的意思却是让我不分心/注意力更集中。建议改为:hardly feel bored

【修改后的版本】

Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me because I'm just the one who has no passion for anything about art. Most of the time, when others are appreciating a great work of art, I will just count when the class will end. Sometimes, I may even have to drink a lot of coffee before the class to prevent myself from falling asleep during the class.

By contrast, in the science class, it is so interesting that I hardly feel bored. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid, all of these can spark my interest and I am overwhelmed by tons of the secrets of the cosmos.

托福口语模板分析:

本文来自亦鸥晨读团网友stellast,超萌的发音!非常详细的内容!

请大家注意:口语答案要求我们提供【details/ examples 一定要在答案中体现细节和例子】!stellast同学在这一点上,为我们做出了相当棒的示范!她在描述science class的有趣时,引入了非常多的细节,在充分论证的同时还展示了自己所掌握的丰富词汇,可谓一箭双雕!希望大家都可以向她学习哦!

此外,她在本文中,实际上只说了1个理由:对art我根本不感兴趣,觉得无聊。然后进行了正反对比论证。这也是一种讲托福口语的方式。

在此,说一下本题的几个常见错误发音:【不要乱加r系列】

1. fun 不要发成“放”!

2. art 不要发成aunt, 要发出r的音哦!

3. science 不要发成"散s",应该是/'saɪəns/!

类似的:surroundings /sə'raʊndɪŋ/ 也不要忘记发n

4. passion /'pæʃ(ə)n/不要发成pension/'penʃ(ə)n/ 主要就是注意元音的发音,是/æ/不是/e/5. passionate 同理/'pæʃ(ə)nət/,一定要注意两个a的发音哦!

6. mysterious 不要忘记浊化s之后的t

类似的:station, stand, stunned; street, stranger, stress

7. curiosity 这个词有好几个音节,不要吞音哈~因为比较难发音,所以范本答案中,我们改成了interest~

8. overwhelmed over的v请不要忘记轻咬下唇~

接下来,Pt来介绍一些值得积累的表达:

1. 【have passion for sth.】对某事怀有激情

2. 【Most of the time,】大多数时候(大多数人 = most people, a majority of people,如果说most of the people意思是“我们中的大多数”,而且,后边要加定语来修饰限制people)

E.g. Most of the people who are reading this article have already been a member of YEEAOO's 晨读团. 【Sigh..... 所以说,才想求转,给更多人看到哇!】

3. 【appreciate a work of art】 欣赏一件艺术作品

4. 【prevent sb. from doing sth.】阻止某人做某事

5. 【fall asleep】睡着

6. 【during the class】 在课上 还可以说in a/the class

7. 【hardly feel bored】从不感到无聊 (hardly 相当于一个否定词)

8. 【mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid】神秘的黑洞,神奇的万有引力和尚未被发现的小行星

9. 【arouse/ spark my interest; arouse/ spark/ awaken/ pique my curiosity】 激发我的兴趣/好奇心

10.【be overwhelmed by sth.】使某人感到非常惊讶


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