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托福培训
托福考试动态
2016-04-19 15:32
来源：网络来源
作者：上海新东方整理
摘要：托福口语如何备考？托福口语答题思路是什么？下面小编为大家带来托福口语模板：更受尊重的职业，希望给各位带来启发！
托福口语题目：
It is generally agreed that the society benefits from the work of its members. Which type of contribution do you think is most valued by your society: primary school teachers, artists or nurses? Why?
托福口语参考范文：
Even though artists and nurses are 【also】 very important, I 【still】 believe primary school teachers are 【most valued】 by our society.
First, because these teachers enjoy 【the highest status】. They have had the largest wage increase these years and are respected by people from【all】walks of life since 【everyone】 needs to send their children to school for education. And people are proud to be a teacher.
Second, the contribution of these teachers cannot be replaced. As we all know, pupils are still 【too young】 to have 【any】 self-discipline and their parents are 【always】 busy with work, having 【no】 time to take care of them. So kids are in 【great】 needs of the supervision and guidance from teachers.
“【】”体现——最受重视的“最”
托福口语参考答案：
Even though artists and nurses are +also very important, I still believe primary school teachers are the most valued by our society.
【观点】小让步 + 小学教师最受社会的重视
【论证：加+also，强调在让步;
语法：most如果修饰的是动词，表示“最……”，不用加the】
Firstly, because these teachers enjoy a higher status. As we know, the salary salaries of these teachers have been raised these years. And also they are respected by all walks of people people from all walks of life. For example, when they go to some restaurants, hotels or tourist spot spots, they can enjoy a comparatively lower low price.
托福口语模板分析：
【理由1：小学教师的地位比较高】
【从理由句就出现一个问题：没有体现——“最”，地位不是最高，工资不是最高，只有尊重来自“各行各业”算是体现了“最”。
但是来自各行各业人的尊重也论证不准确：拿到相对较低的交割并不等于被尊重。如果按照这个标准去评价：学生也受到了全社会的尊重，很多大型企业的职员也受到了全社会的尊重——这不过是一种福利，社会给的/企业给的福利。】
那什么原因让各行各业的人都尊重他们呢?——因为都要送孩子去学校嘛!——因为小学教师的影响力太大呀!受益方太多啊!——你的孩子，或许可能不上高中，上中专;不上大学，上大专;不上研究生，上班——但，你的孩子能连小学都不上吗?——所以才超重视嘛!
语法：1. salary是可数名词，故these teachers的工资，应该用复数形式;
2. 并没有all walks of people这样的表达，如果想说“来自各行各业的人”，可以说“people from all walks of life”;
3. comparatively的意思是：“相较而言”，故后边无须再加比较级】
Second, the contribution of these teachers cannot be replaced. As we know, kids are the future of our country. If they are taught very well, they will have a better contribution to our country. And a good teacher will actually change the future of our kids.
【理由2：教师的贡献无可替代】
【理由句正确，但是论证根本没有证明这种“不可替代性”。这里说到的内容是：孩子是国家的未来。他们接受了良好的教育，长大才能报效祖国。一个好教师将能够改变孩子的未来——这并没有体现不可替代性啊?这只能体现小学教师这个行业的重要性啊!
什么是不可替代性呢?就是：这些事情只能由小学教师来完成，其他人无法替代他们完成。
什么样的人可能会替代小学教师的工作呢?1. 小学生自己;2. 家长。1不行，因为他们太小，缺乏自律性;2不行，因为他们太忙，没有时间。】
综上，Pt修改后的最终版：Even though artists and nurses are 【also】 very important, I 【still】 believe primary school teachers are 【most valued】 by our society.
First, because these teachers enjoy 【the highest status】. They have had the largest wage increase these years and are respected by people from【all】walks of life since 【everyone】 needs to send their children to school for education. And people are proud to be a teacher.
Second, the contribution of these teachers cannot be replaced. As we all know, pupils are still 【too young】 to have 【any】 self-discipline and their parents are 【always】 busy with work, having 【no】 time to take care of them. So kids are in 【great】 needs of the supervision and guidance from teachers.
“【】”体现——最受重视的“最”
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