2016年美国留学申请文书写作攻略：素材积累

2016年美国留学申请文书写作攻略：素材积累。在申请美国留学的时候虽然很看重语言成绩以及在校的成绩单，但是文书的写作也是占据了很大的地位，直接会影响申请的结果，下面是如何积累美国留学申请文书的写作攻略，希望能够帮助到大家。

虽然申请美国留学的文书写作有一定的难度，但是大家掌握一定的技巧，加上积累一些文书的写作素材之后，文书其实也不是那么难，下面为大家分享一篇文书的写作范文，以及文书的素材积累方法。

申请留学文书写作素材怎么整理?很多学生都觉得美国大学申请文书很难写，本来是自己的事情却不知道从而说起。其实申请文书写作没有想象中那么困难，但在写美国大学申请文书之前最好要对自己的写作素材进行整理。

身边人对你的影响：除了学术方面，学校都想通过美国大学申请文书了解申请人的人生观和价值观，通过学生所崇拜的对象学校可以看出学生对于是与非的分辨。这里主要考核的是学生的价值观还有通过对你影响最深的人推断出你以后的成长轨迹。

独特的成长环境：美国学校很注重多样性，所以学校在挑选学生的时候都比较prefer一些有着独特文化背景，教育背景或个人成长背景的学生。例如你来自一些少数民族或者来自一些民族特征比较明显的地区如西北地区等，往往不同地区的人们性格会有或多或少的不一样的，这就要看你自己对于自己的民族或所在地区的深刻理解了。

志愿者经历：美国学校看重的并不是你的成绩有多么多么的优秀，你曾经拿过多少奖项，而更多的是看重学生的志愿者经历，而这些恰恰是中国学生所缺失的。

才艺：通常美国大学申请文书的Essay题目里面都会有一条是关于课外活动的，主要考核的是学生的各种能力、性格特点等方面。

　每年的美国留学申请文书题目虽然都不一样，但是主要类型就那些种类，大家可以分类积累一些素材，下面为大家分享一篇文书的范文，可以参考一下。

I wake up every morning to its rich scent. My parents cannot start the day with out it. I often wait in line and pay $3.85 to buy it. The senior lodge at my school is littered with empty Starbucks cups containing only the remnants of skim lattes, , and mocha frapuccinos. Coffee is a staple of American life that many take for granted, but few take the time to think about how they get it.

In the rural village of Cadillo in the Dominican Republic, the people’s livelihood depends on coffee. Rows of green coffee plants line steep hills and scatter the countryside. The people there pick and sell the coffee beans but receive little profit for their hard work.

During the week I spent in Cadillo playing , I witnessed the poverty these coffee farmers endure. Their homes are small and dark, furnished with only a few wooden chairs, a table and a few beds. There is no lawyers and electricity in Cadillo and I especially remember the emptiness of the village at night, when I could only vaguely see the faces I illuminated with my flashlight. I can still see the shiny metal bowl in which they used to bathe, and Jose, a neighbor who was missing several teeth because like most people in Cadillo, he lacks a toothbrush and could not afford a .

These images still burn in my mind, but it was the people of Cadillo more than anything who opened my eyes to the importance of social justice. Before I met them it was just a concept I heard about a few times a year at church when a missionary would come to speak about the poor people in Africa or South America and explain why it was our duty to help them. These people were far removed. A small fraction of my weekly allowance, once a year, and I could remove them from my mind. After living for a week with a family in Cadillo, however, I understood for the first time that it was real people leading these lives.

The family I stayed with there took me in as part of their family and gave me a taste of their life. I remember my Dominican father, Barilla’s face as he played guitar and how he laughed kindly when I struggled to play the chords he had taught me. I could feel the warmth and sincerity of my Dominican mother, Marsela, when she sat and talked with me about my home and family after a long day of work. And I will always remember how much fun I had playing catch or blowing bubbles with their two children, Jendi and Andisco.

I will not forget the images I saw or the people I encountered. They made me realize that my work does not end with the school I helped build, the holes I helped dig, or the roads I helped widen. They showed me that there are real, wonderful people being treated unjustly and that I cannot sit back and let that happen. I cannot be silent when I know that people are getting rich off the coffee Barilla receives so little for. It is my responsibility to be active, to teach what I have learned, to fight injustices in my community and the world.

I am not sure if I will ever visit Cadillo again but I do know that I can continue what I started there. I can tell people what I saw and spread awareness about injustice in the world. I can volunteer in my own community to help make changes at home and fundraise to aid third world countries. And tomorrow, after I wake up to the smell of fresh coffee, I can make a difference.

以上就是为大家带来的美国大学申请文书范例，希望能够对大家有所帮助。

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