【新东方雅思写作】雅思大作文（5）

2018-07-23 16:54

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竞技体育是否最益于团队精神

　　【教育类】

　　Some people think that the best way to teach children to learn to cooperate with others is through team sports at school，to what extent do you agree or disagree?有人认为：通过参加学校的体育运动，是使人学会合作的最佳方法，是否同意?

　　【雅思题库】

　　Some people argue that schools should only offer subjects that are beneficial to students' future careers. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人认为：学校应该给孩子们提供便于就业的课程，其他课程，例如音乐课和体育课，不重要，是否同意这个观点。

　　【布局图】

　　首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

　　二段：让步原题观点的合理性

　　三段：反驳原题观点之不合理

　　尾段：再次亮明观点

　　写作类型：反对唯一性和最佳性

　　【作家立场】

　　鼓励孩子们从事竞技体育活动是培养他们合作精神和群体性经验的有效策略之一，但是，这不是最佳的、唯一的方式。

　　【范文赏析】

　　【首段】背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

　　 Growth education is one of the key words of a person's development. People have been debating, for many years, whether the best approach to enhance children's cooperative consciousness is through encouraging them to embark on sports-related activities at school without reaching any definite consensus. To voice my opinion, inspiring students to dive into sports events is one of the effective strategies to help them cultivate cooperation spirit and group experience, yet, it is not the best and only way.