【新东方雅思写作】雅思大作文（5）

　　4. Having PE class could， to large extent， enhance students' health index 体育课可以提高学生的健康指数

　　5. …… is an effective pressure-reducer …… 是很好的缓解压力的方式

　　6. …… could help students to relax their bodies and ease their minds ……可以帮助学生放松身心

　　点评：万能支持理由，口语写作通用

　　7. would one's temperament 陶冶情操

　　8. …… must be beneficial to building one's optimistic personality …… 有助于培养人乐观的性格

 9. deepen one's love about life and art 加深对于生活和艺术的热爱

 10. Having PE or music class，by occupying spare time constructively， makes students contented, with no time for boredom. 上音乐体育课，通过有建设性地利用时间，使学生们心满意足，再也没有无聊之感

　　点评： 写作亮点，重点背诵

　　11. …… enhance one's competitiveness in the future job-seeking 提高择业的竞争力

　　点评：适合写作便于就业的课程

　　12. career-oriented knowledge and job-related skills 以择业为导向的知识以及和就业相关的技能

　　点评：适合写作支持学习实用性的课程

　　13. Education is a sort of intellectual investment and every investor desires to earn high interests， namely， a well-paying and decent career 教育是智力投资，人人渴望获得高额的利息（良好的回报），即高薪的稳定的职业

　　14. In light of this statement， some people argue that college teachers should give priority to career-oriented courses 因此，有人认为老师应该教授以择业为导向的课程

　　点评：In light of this statement = therefore = hence = thereby = in this sense 因此

　　15. Introducing music and PE class into school curriculum could，to some extent， assist students realizing overall development and add spice to their dull routine of everyday life. 鼓励学生们上音乐课和体育课，可以很大程度上帮助学生们实现全面的发展以及增加他们生活的乐趣

 点评：help sb do sth = assist sb doing sth = enable sb to do sth 帮助某人做……