【新东方雅思写作】雅思大作文（5）

　　【解析】

　　1. Growth education is one of the key words of a person's development 成长教育者个人的发展中至关重要。

　　2. embark on sports-related activities v从事和体育相关的活动

　　3. Inspiring students to dive into sports events is one of the effective strategies to help them cultivate cooperation spirit and group experience. 鼓励孩子们从事竞技体育活动是培养他们的合作精神和群体性经验的有效策略之一。

　　【二段】让步原题观点之合理性

　　Indeed, I have to concede that those who argue that sports activities can help young adults to nurture teamwork spirit and raise their awareness of cooperation are, to some extent, never without their reasons. Some people might argue that sports events can assist students in learning how to communicate and associate with people around them and thus improve their cooperation. To illustrate, in a basketball team, team member has to learn to tolerate and unite others, they must work together as a team and stick together as friends to win the victory. In this sense, campus activities can cultivate one's cooperation spirit.

　　【解析】

　　1. nurture teamwork spirit and raise their awareness of cooperation 培养团队精神和合作意识

　　2. how to communicate and associate with people around them 学习如何与人交往交流

　　3. they must work together as a team and stick together as friends to win the victory. 他们必须团结一致，相交如友，才能取得胜利。

　　【三段】反驳其不合理性：

　　Nevertheless，as for how to develop one's teamwork spirit, there are still a great many other options available. First, it works for students to partake of group learning. For example，I once participated in a study group，we have to make joint efforts to finish the professor's assignments. Each team member has to learn how to coordinate and work with others. Sometimes, one has to sacrifice his or her advantage to help the team stand out. Also, efforts could be made by parents to send children to summer or winter holiday camping, which is also an ideal way to strengthen students' group consciousness and interpersonal skills. Eventually, it is duty of every individual to learn to be big heart and put himself or herself in others' shoes and thus people can live in harmony with other peers.