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2018中考首发解析 | 中考英语作文+听力
2018-07-11 13:54
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新东方优能中学英语教研组
为同学们带来了
2018中考英语听力+作文详尽解析
建议大家等中考考完后再看哦~
作文解析
2018上海中考英语考试刚刚结束，写作题目如近几年一样，围绕“我”这个主人公展开。那么怎么写才能拿到高分，我们一起来看看吧。
2018中考英语写作：
题目:
My Progress
要求：从生活技能、良好的习惯等角度，结合生活中的具体事例，说明“我的进步”
推荐搭配：used to、try my best to do、make progress in doing
解析：
正如我们在课堂上讲的一样，本篇写作的思路可以用“What—How—Conclusion”的三步写作思路来完成。
第一部分阐述progress的重要性及生活中极其常见；
第二部分结合自己生活中的具体事例，阐述在某一个或两个生活技能或良好习惯的形成过程中如何取得进步；
第三部分升华主题部分，生活中应该不断提升自我，尽力取得进步。
BY 上海新东方优能中学米萌老师
接下来为同学们带来几篇范文作参考：
范文一：
We all need to make progress to improve ourselves. By making progress, we can get rid of our shortcomings. I used to be a boy who was not interested in reading at all. Instead of reading extracurricular books in my spare time, I usually idled away an entire day playing computer games.
It was the words from my Chinese teacher that affected me greatly. One day I was criticized for performing poorly in the previous exam, especially in composition. She said, “The more books you read, the broader your horizon will be. I believe you can reach a bigger world by reading.” After hearing that, I was really shocked and ashamed. From then on, I tried my best to read a vast variety of books, from Yehuo Ji to Pride and Prejudice, from ancient Chinese literature to global history. As a result, not only have I developed a good habit of reading, but also I have made great progress in writing skills since then.
You reap what you sow. Throughout our life, we should keep renewing ourselves by reading. What’s more, with constant effort, we can achieve any progress to become a better person.
BY 上海新东方优能中学倪苍靖老师
精彩亮点分析：
亮点一：全文多处运用如“after hearing that” as a result” “what’s more” 等表示逻辑关系的副词短语，使文章结构条理清晰。
亮点二：全文采用了定语从句、非谓语作伴随状语、倒装句、被动语态等不同形式的从句和修饰成分，使得文章句型更丰富。
亮点三：文中采用了超纲词（vast，constant，extracurricular等）及谚语（You reap what you sow.）为文采进一步加分。
范文二：
There is no doubt that progress is the stepping-stone to future success.
I used to be a girl who was bad at making decisions. However, one significant progress which happened last year changed this habit.
Last year, I signed up with an English speech contest and was required to turn in my speech draft within a week. Until the last day, I still couldn’t write one complete sentence down because I had so many topics to choose and I didn’t know where to start. I was so upset that I decided to ask my mother for some advice. Instead of choosing a topic for me, she gave me unconditional encouragement and then explained with patience to help me divide things into different levels of importance. Then I was able to choose the most important topic to start.
During our conversation, I felt a spark in my brain and all the topics were like stars in dark blue sky and I was able to see the brightest one. With this progress in making decisions, I then focused on writing for 4 hours and finally completed my speech draft on time. To my surprise, I even won the second place in my class in later competition!
This experience make me realize that I am independent enough to make the best choice in my life and overcome any difficulties in my future! What a precious progress!
BY 上海新东方优能中学张茜老师
精彩亮点分析：
亮点一：全文巧用“focused on doing” To my surprise” “there is no doubt” 等亮点短语和经典句型搭配，逻辑通顺，语言流畅。
亮点二：全文采用了定语从句、伴随状语、并列句，感叹句等不同形式的从句和修饰成分，让文章句型丰富，形象
亮点三：文中出现了“significant, unconditional，spark” 这些超纲单词及自我内在转变的一个比喻，恰到好处地描述了自己从选择困难症到独立做决定的过程，题材贴合实际，且为文采再次进行润色。
范文三：
It is no wonder that there must be something special in everyone’s memory. To me, the most unforgettable thing is about my progress in cycling. I used to feel nervous about cycling, and on account of that, I had to spend a lot of time on the way to school. However, it was my teacher’s word that changed me a lot. That is to say, one has to stay calm when confronted with the difficulties. After that, I tried my best to forget the nervousness and practice a lot. At last, I was so amazed when I made progress in riding a bike. From this progress I learnt that to calm down helps you to think clearly and encourages you to achieve your goals.
BY 上海新东方优能中学李允玥老师
精彩亮点分析：
亮点一：全文总-分-总结构，每句话前都有连词引导，并将事情着重要点阐述，使得文章更有逻辑性。
亮点二：全文采用了宾语从句、定语从句、强调句等不同形式的从句，让文章句型朴实但华丽，文采上加分。
亮点三：文中出现了“on account of, be confronted with” 这些超纲词组，并配合非谓语结构，恰到好处地点睛了自己困难的理由，到冷静面对困难。为文章添彩。
听力解析
A. Listen and choose the right picture
（根据你听到的内容，选出相应的图片）
1．Alice is always active in Maths lessons.
2．We must wear seat belts when we travel by car.
3．Nowadays it is popular to make cookies at home.
4．The pretty clothes in the shop caught Helen’s eye.
5．Cycling is good exercise, isn’t it?
6．Jane and her daughter are having a good time in the swimming pool.
解析：
第一大题均是简单句，
语义明确，难度较小。
B. Listen to the dialogue and choose the best answer to the question you hear（根据你听到的对话和问题，选出最恰当的答案）
7．M: Wow, so many apples here. They are my favourite.
W: Yes. Apples are good, but I like oranges best.
Q: What is the woman’s favourite fruit?
8．M: When will the foreign students arrive at our school tomorrow?
W: At 9 o’clock in the morning, and the welcome party will start at 9:15.
Q: When will the foreign students arrive?
9．W: Are we driving to the Century Park, Tony?
M: Well, it’s difficult to find a parking space there. Let’s take the underground.
Q: How will they go to the Century Park?
10. M: What a day! It’s raining again.
W: Yes, it is. It has rained for a whole week. Hope it will be sunny tomorrow.
Q: How is the weather today?
11. W: Hey, John. Any plans for your summer holiday?
M: I’m going to visit my uncle in Beijing. What about you？
W: I will go to a language camp in London with my classmates.
Q: What will John do in the summer holiday?
12. W: Tom, go to the store downstairs and get some salt for me. I’m busy cooking.
M: Ok, mum. I will go right away.
Q: Where does this dialogue probably take place?
13. W: This pair of shoes looks perfect on you, sir.
M: Thanks, emmm…But it’s a little bigger.
W: Ok, try on this pair, please. Size 41.
Q: What’s the probable relationship between the two speakers?
14. M: I happened to meet your sister Lucy in the supermarket. She didn’t recognize
me at first.
W: It’s not surprising You’ve put on too much weight recently. It’s time for you to do something.
Q: What does the woman suggest the man do?
解析：
第二大题听对话选答案，解题技巧是在听到的对应选项旁边做好相应笔记。
如第8题必然会有两个选项“9：00”与“9：15”，在“9：00”旁记下“arrive”，在“9：15”旁记下“party”，然后根据问题（关键词“arrive”）选择相应回答（9：00）即可。 需要注意的是高中阶段对话和问题都只有一遍，因此之后对同学们速记能力和专注度的要求也会更高。
C. Listen to the passage and tell whether the following sentences are true or false（判断下列句子是否符合你听到的短文内容，符合的用“T”表示，不符合的用“F”表示）
Simon: Hello, my name is Simon, are you a new student?
Mary: Yes, I am. My name is Mary, nice to meet you.
Simon: Nice to meet you too. I have studied in this college for 2 years. How do you like your college life?
Mary: It’s wonderful and I’m really enjoying the courses.
Simon: Me too. I think the courses are very interesting, the teachers are excellent and I love classroom discussions. We can express our own feelings freely. That’s lots of fun
Mary: Yes exactly, but I can not find anything interesting to do after class.
Simon: You can join some clubs, and I think you can also do some volunteer work. I have joined a volunteer organization. I will work as a volunteer for an international exhibition. It will be in Shanghai, China.
Mary: Oh really? That sounds great.By the way, when are you leaving?
Simon: In 5 months, the city of shanghai looks so attractive on TV, I have always wanted to visit it.
Mary: Me too. I hope I will have a chance to go there in the future. Wish you good luck in China!
Simon: Thank you.
解析：
本文题材仍然是常考的跨文化题材，以外国学生的角度叙述学生生活和上海，中国，需要注意本文中的两个说话者都不在中国，学生在听的时候需要多重视时间和数字的表达，把握文章大意即可正确判断。
D. Listen to the dialogue and complete the following sentences（听对话，完成下列内容。每空格限填一词）
Kitty’s family had just moved to a new house. It was their first spring there. Kitty was very excited because it was mom’s birthday today. She wanted to plant a little garden with a lot of beautiful flowers for Mum as a birthday present，so she went to a flower shop and bought some flowers with all her pocket money. When Dad saw the flowers, he laughed because they were not real. They were plastic. Dad told Kitty they couldn’t plant plastic flowers in the garden because they wouldn’t grow. Kitty was so sad and she started to cry. Moments later, Dad got a good idea. He went to his friend, Mr. White, to borrow some flower seeds. With the seeds, they started their work. They planted the seeds and put the plastic flowers above them. They worked in the Garden for three hours. When mom got back, she was surprised to see the plastic flowers in the garden, but after hearing the whole story, she was moved to tears by the special present. It was a present full of love.
解析：
本文以温馨趣味的家庭话题来考察，题材贴合生活，词句都较为简单，注意听懂文段的动词短语搭配即可正确填出答案。
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