Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!

　  答案：

　　第一句：before→ago　此处讲述的是过去发生的事情，和一般过去时连用的应是ago,before常和完成时连用。

　　第一句：by→of　with the help of……在……的帮助下，为固定短语。

　　第二句：year→years　句中year是可数名词，前面的these应修饰复数形式的名词。

　　第二句：had→have　时间状语since then 通常和现在完成时连用，而不是过去完成时。

　　第三句：在result前加a　as a result 结果，为固定短语。

　　第三句：somewhere→everywhere　根据句意可知是“到处都有”,所以用everywhere.

　　第四句：taste→tasty　本句中small,juicy和tasty是并列的表语，所以要用形容词。

　　第五句：much→many　根据前面的be动词are和后面的them可知应是代替可数名词复数的many.

　　第六句：删掉but/but→yet　引导让步状语从句的although不能和连词but连用，但是可以和副词yet连用。所以可以删掉but,也可以把but改为yet.

　　第七句：wonderfully→wonderful　修饰名词时应用形容词。

2

    My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

　　My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

　　答案：

　　本文为记叙文，题材是学校生活类。作者描述了自己心目中理想的校园。

　　第二句：They→There　表示“上午有三节课，下午有两节课”应使用there be句型。

　　第三句：didn’t→don’t　全文时态是以一般现在时为主，故应将didn’t改为don’t.

　　第三句：many→much　homework是不可数名词，故应用much修饰。

　　第四句：with→for　表示时间、金钱、空间等足够/足以(用于……)时，应使用介词for.

　　第五句：第一个hour→hours　“一个半小时”要说one and a half hours.

　　第六句：look→looks　主语My dream school(我梦想中的学校)是单数，其谓语动词也应使用第三人称单数形式。

　　第七句：删掉第一个the　all kinds of(各种各样的)后直接加可数名词复数或不可数名词，不用再加冠词。

　　第八句：sat→sit　We can lie……,or (can) sit……

　　第八句：listening后加to　listen是不及物动词，接宾语时要加介词to.

　　第九句：helpfully→helpful　and连接两个形容词作表语，故应将副词helpfully改为形容词helpful.

3

    I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.

　　Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.

　　No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.

　　答案：

　　1.第二句：删掉had.此处指过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时。

　　2.第二句：noise→noisy.此处作表语，应该是形容词。

　　3.第三句：comes→came.此处是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时。

　　4.第四句：but→and.此处是顺承关系。

　　5.第五句：在searching后加for.搜寻某个东西应该用search for.

　　6.第五句：his→its/the.此处指票的主人。

　　7.第六句：a→the.此处特指丢了的票。

　　8.第七句：previous→previously.此处应该用副词形式。

　　9.第八句：strangers→stranger.此处指的是票的主人，只有一个人，所以用单数。

　　10.第九句：on→in.此处是固定词组in need.