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中考英语作文满分范文赏析【I am ready】

2016-08-25 15:58

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作者:中学栏目编辑

中考英语作文是中考英语中考察学生词汇、语法和语言组织能力的一项综合题目。在整个中考英语试卷中也占有一定比例的分数。为了帮助同学更好的书写作文,这个给大家介绍几篇经典的英语作文。更多精彩内容,尽在上海新东方优能中学

I am ready

  Frankly speaking, I’ve dreamed of being an excellent photographer since my childhood. The feeling of capturing the beautiful scenery, the charming smile and the unforgettable moment of our life definitely attract me a lot. Therefore, I tried to gain a lot of basic knowledge of photography and took part in the photograph competition in our school. To my satisfaction, I won the first prize. This year, I have turned 15 and I am ready to be a professional photographer. What I plan to do is to participate in a ‘photography club.’ In this way, I will not only acquire fantastic theories about photography but also learn a great many valuable skills through interaction with my friends. ‘Every effort I make is worth the price and it will pay off in the end.’ I will spare no effort to realize my dream and I am definitely ready to embrace my promising future:to be an excellent photographer.

作文评讲:

1.Frankly speaking, I’ve dreamed of being an excellent photographer since my childhood. Frankly speaking 现在分词作伴随状语,表达自然贴切,in my childhood 表达地道。
2.The feeling of capturing the beautiful scenery, the charming smile and the unforgettable moment of our life definitely attract me a lot. 三个平行结构结构严谨,表达流畅。
3.Thus, I tried to gain a lot of basic knowledge of photography and took part in the photograph competition in our school. 简明扼要阐述自己因为爱好所付出的不懈努力。
4.This year, I have turned 15 and I am ready to be a professional photographer. Turn 15 用法原汁原味,I am ready to be a professional photographer.
5.What I plan to do is to participate in a ‘photography club.’ 巧妙运用主语从句表达自己对未来的期望与目标。
6.In this way, I will not only acquire fantastic theories about photography but also learn a great many valuable skills through interaction with my friends. Not only…but also句型很棒,表达自己未来所能取得的巨大进步。
7.‘Every effort I make is worth the price and it will pay off in the end.’ 恰如其分地引用Steve Jobs的经典语句,为结尾作铺垫。
8.I will spare no effort to realize my dream and I am definitely ready to embrace my promising future:to be an excellent photographer. Spare no effort to do不遗余力的地做。。。表达高端。总结流畅自然,浑然天成。


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