2011上海高考英语作文范文解析

作文一直都是英语考试中比较重要的一个内容，它的分值也是比较高的。很多同学都会参考一些往年的高考范文，2011上海高考英语作文范文就是大家的参考文章之一，对于2011上海高考英语作文范文的解析新东方老师做得也是非常详细的。

　　

在高考中，作文的题目和文体都是不确定的，大家在平时的学习中就要多去练习写作，并且掌握一些写作的技巧。下面就是一篇2011上海高考英语作文范文：

　　

范文：

　　

Dear World Child Foundation organizers，

　　

My name is Jerry Lu, a student currently studying at Shanghai XX High school. I am writing, on behalf of my classmates, to apply for the 2000 yuan's worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.

　　

Being raised in families that don’t have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students in a poverty-stricken area. It is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us “doling out” the supplies so that we wouldn’t end up embarrassing those who we want to help. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions.

　　

At the end of the day, our efforts might only trigger a ripple in the lives of some young people, but who knows what butterfly effects these young minds may have on tomorrow's world?

　　

We would be much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience.

　　

Yours Sincerely,

　　

Jerry Lu

　　

对于这篇2011上海高考英语作文范文新东方的老师也做出了这样的解析：

　　

高中英语作文并没有太大的难度，只要大家在写作的时候加入一些能够让自己作文加分的语法，还有一个清晰的逻辑就可以了。这些都是老师给大家评分时候的给分点，那么这篇2011上海高考英语作文范文中用到的语法给分点就有下面的这些：

　　

1. 同位语 2. v-ing作定语 3. 插入语

　　

4. 词组如：in a bid to, financially disadvantaged，on this account, oblivion to

　　

5. 过去分词作定语 6. v-ing作主语 7. 定语从句

　　

8. it作形式主语的主语从句 9. 虚拟语气

　　

10. 目的状语从句 11. 倒装句 12. 宾语从句

　　

大家可以看见，这篇范文里面运用了很多的句式，这样的文章看起来就是非常的有水平的。另外，2011上海高考英语作文范文是一篇申请信的形式，其实这种文体也是比较简单的，只要大家记住格式，里面的内容根据作文的提示大家都是可以和轻松的就完成的。但是大家需要注意的就是要使自己的文章有亮点，大家要像这篇例文一样，在里面应用一些高级的句型和词组，那么你的作文也能得高分。

 

 

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