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雅思作文范文解析

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摘要:以《说谎有没有必要》这个雅思作文题目进行一下范文分析。
 

作文在雅思考试中的份量,相信很多考生都知道,而雅思作文也是很多考生大费脑筋的一道题目,想写好作文,广泛的阅读是不可缺少的,不然,脑海中没有阐述观点的思路,想法会很晦涩难懂,即便是有想法,想要写结果还是写不出来。就好像茶壶煮饺子,有嘴倒不出。雅思作文范文在我们读杂志的时候经常会出现,这时候我们就应该好好分析一下雅思作文范文,找到我们需要学习地方。

下面是根据《说谎有没有必要》这个雅思作文题目进行一下范文分析。

  Telling lie is usually looked upon as an evil, because some people try to get benefit from dishonest means or try to conceal their faults. On the other hand,honesty is widely recognized as the best policy.

首段在一开始就阐明了作者的观点,“honesty is widely recognized as the best policy”。一篇文章有一个明确的主旨是很重要的,这样的鲜明观点也能够让阅卷老师对你的文章内容一目了然。

  Parents always try to prove the benefits of being honest when you are a little child. A good story in this regard is .One day the child Washington chop down his farther’ s favorite cherry tree; although knowing he would deserve to be punished, he told his father the truth. Unexpected, his farther apprised him rather than executing a punishment; moreover, he was encouraged to maintain the good manner all the time. As known to all, the honest boy eventually became one of the greatest presidents in American history.

  However, telling lie,despite its negative effects, sometimes is essential in our daily life. First, the liar itself will benefit from the lie by escaping from the pressure of unnecessary embarrassment. On the other hand, the listener will feel more comfortable by reasonable excuses. For example, if a little girl’s farther died in an accident, her mother would comfort her by saying" farther has gone to another beautiful land". In such cases, a lie with original goodwill is like a naught angel who might make the cruel nice. Furthermore, To some extent, the skills of telling lie can be regard as a capacity of creation and imagination.

通过一个简短的故事论证了作者的观点,说谎是不可取的。这样一来整篇文章的中心内容就有理可依,文章的论证都是围绕中心展开的。并且在这个小故事中还运用了“although”句型,和众多的连词,这样就凸显了作者的英文写作功底。

Taking all those factors into consideration, we can definitely come to the conclusion that whether telling lie is harmful depends on its original intention and the ultimate result it will bring. If one is honest with oneself, one always learns from mistakes, can correct a concept or a hypothesis and work further, and reach the goal finally.

 在文章的最户还是要对自己的文章中心做最后的总结,这样才能够看起来文章比较完整、紧凑、连贯。

 通过对以上雅思作文范文的分析,不难发现词汇量的多少和语法的娴熟度是一篇好的文章的基础。所以考生在闲暇时间,哪怕是喝杯茶的功夫也要记得做点学习英语的基础功夫,背几个单词,学几个英语语法。

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