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错误示范:Sentences which are too long will demand hard efforts from the reader to get in all the details, see through the meaning, and get the right picture that the named sentence aims to deliver.
正确示范:Sentences which are too long are hard to read. They might not
deliver the meaning efficiently.
句子太短
相反,句子太短也不是一种聪明的写法。过多的短句会削弱文章的连贯性,让读者读起来断断续续不够流畅。而同时,通常来说用短句是无法表达出你复杂严谨的思考的。避免句子过短最好的诀窍是,运用并列结构,将它们组合在一起成为 20-25 的句子就可以啦。
错误示范:Short sentences are simple. Avoid mistakes. Write short sentences.
They aid clarity. They are intense.
正确示范:The simplicity of short sentences helps to avoid the mistakes. Use
them to deliver a clear and intense message.
句首使用重复的连词
首先用连词大多数情况是没有问题的。不过如果你的句子的开头看上去都差不多的话,读者一看就知道你的语言是“牙牙学语”的初级水平。避免毛病的最好办法就是换一种表达。比如下面例子
错误示范:The sentences were pretty similar. And that fact was obvious to the
researchers. And that's why they pointed it out in their reports.
正确示范:The sentences were pretty similar. Researchers pointed out this obvious fact in their reports.
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