【新东方雅思写作】雅思大作文（6）

　　【三段】 家庭教育的弊端

　　Home education, however, might trigger some disadvantages to some extent. Virtually, on no account can we ignore its potential drawbacks. On the downsides, those home learners tend to be socially inadequate due to the lack of group experience. Even worse，one might become introverted or eccentric when he or she is confined to home schooling for a long time. By contrast, traditional classroom education can help youngsters to learn to how to communicate and associate with their peers. Another demerit might be that in comparison with parents, teachers are professionally well-trained, know the common sense of education and can summarize the core of knowledge. In this sense, those who receive traditional education are liable to excel academically.

　　【解析】

　　1. tend to be socially inadequate 倾向于变得社交方面力不从心

　　2. one might become introverted or eccentric 一个人也许会变得内向，性格古怪

　　3. are professionally well-trained 专业上训练有素

　　4. know the common sense of education 了解教育的常识

　　5. can summarize the core of knowledge 可以总结学科的精华

　　6. are liable to excel academically 可能学习成绩优异

　　【尾段】 亮明观点 + 总结理由

　　In closing，my stand is that although home education might have some advantages in some facets, it is not universally suitable for most people. For one thing, educators outshine parents in terms of disseminating knowledge. For another, those who receive home education are more likely to be emotionally underdeveloped in their relations with their peers.

　　【解析】

　　1. Educators outshine parents in terms of disseminating knowledge 在传授知识方面，教育者比家长更胜一筹。

　　2. Those who receive home education are more likely to be emotionally underdeveloped. 接受家庭教育者可能在情感上发育不良。