【新东方雅思写作】雅思大作文（6）

　　【范文赏析】

　　【首段】背景介绍 + 争议焦点+　作家立场

　　Parents are, in most cases, extremely concerned about the growth of their children. When conventional teaching fails some parents, some of them prefer to educate their children at home. People have been pondering, for many years, whether or not home schooling is superior to traditional teaching without reaching any definite consensus. As I see it, as for those home learners, what will be lost is greater than what will be gained.

　　【解析】

　　1. fail sb 使某人失望

　　2. is superior to 优越于

　　3. What will be lost is greater than what will be gained. 弊大于利

　　【二段】 家庭教育的利好

　　Some parents believe that it is more feasible to let their children receive domestic education because they believe this mode of education enables children to grow better both academically and mentally. One of the most glaring merits of family education is that students with diverse abilities can receive the custom-tailored education, which fits for them. After all, parents are most familiar with their children and willing to devote all their hearts to children’s character-training and moral education. Another benefit coming from parenting is that it is a good way to strengthen the family tie. The more time parents spend cultivating their children，the better parent-children relationship will be.

　　【解析】

　　1. grow better both academically and mentally 在学术和心智上都更好地成长

　　2. Students with diverse abilities can receive the custom-tailored education 不同的学生可以接受量体裁衣的教育。

　　3. devote all their hearts to children’s character-training and moral education 全心投注于专注于孩子们的性格培养和道德教育

　　4. parenting n父母对于孩子的教育

　　5. strengthen the family tie 增强家庭联系