雅思写作提纲分享（一）

　　五、考试

　　1. Used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fail in a subject

　　2. 不能evaluate one’s true ability.只是测试memory or the skill of working rapidly under pressure.

　　高分does not mean possessing creativity in dealing various problems

　　3. Encourage bad study habits, emphasis on memorizing 考试内容 rather than to think。考试前非常用功，但是考试后forget all the information

　　4. lower the standards of teaching, deprive teachers of freedom. Teacher are judge by the examination results of students, 老师只顾教了考试技巧。

　　5. 考试是可以作为评判学生的一个依据，但是不能是唯一evaluation.

　　六、科技(电话，电脑)的利与弊

　　1. On the positive side,

　　(1) make life faster, easier and safer (2) the world is becoming smaller and closer, trains cars plains make possible to travel to distant places (3)modern communication tools,使人们更好的交流，与任何地方的人交流，特别使促进了business的发展(4)longer life expectancy由于progress of medical science (5)电影电视made life enjoyable and colorful (6)计算机和Internet get information easier, make friends, business, tele-education

　　2. On the negative side, (1)机器的使用造成unemployment(2)电话和互联网的使用alienate people from their friends 因为lack adequate face-to-face communication. (3)Children 缺乏essential interpersonal skills.Those who indulge in … often feel isolated and being cut off from the outside world, they tend to be more introverted, self-centered and with drawn.

　　七、彻底禁止吸烟

　　1. 从经济方面，contribute much to government revenue,如果baned ,则会导致unemployment

　　2. 从权利方面，Smoking just a hobby and amusement, 人们有权选择自己的 lifestyle

　　3. 从健康方面，必须承认抽闲是detrimental to health,但是the harm is exaggerated.如果控制每天的吸烟量，不会对健康造成devastating problem. 而且还有relieve stress 和 calm down.历史上有一些伟人吸烟，毛泽东，邓小平，他们仍然enjoy long life expectancy.

　　八、老年人问题

　　1.take care by children 和in nursing homes 各有优缺点

　　2.在家的话，老人可以享受与家人交流的机会，这样他们不会孤独，而且还可以照顾小孩，而且他们的经验对人们的事业和家庭生活都有帮助。但是由于老人经常会出现健康问题，因此需要花很多时间照料，影响人们的工作。

　　3. 在nursing home的话，可以有更多机会与their peers相处，common language and interest,而且现在的条件越来越好，得到专业的照顾及医疗服务，还有proper diet 对他们的健康有利。而且让小孩有充分的时间工作，追求自己的事业。但是缺少与家人的交流，会使他们感到lonely，出现一些psychological problem而且如果将所有老人都放到rest home,将给政府增加财政负担。

　　4. As neither the two solutions is effective enough to solve the problem of …, I favor the combination of the two.

　　九、怎样对待罪犯

　　1.criminals 应该be locked up in prison(jails).

　　2. can ensure a safe and comfortable living environment for law-abiding citizens. Thieves ,robbers, rapists and murders are dangerous, pose potential threat to the society

　　3. 放到监狱教育是一个很好的方式，让他们知道侵犯其他人的权利是要付出代价的，这样就会减少他们再次犯罪的可能性

　　4.不但是punish criminals but also deters the potential criminals. 有些有犯罪倾向的人由于害怕被处罚，可能会放弃commit crime.

　　5.应该放到监狱。Just as the old saying goes, mercy to the criminal may be cruelty to the people.