雅思小作文解析及范文（一）

　　9分范文

　　The graph shows the change of percentage of TV and Radio audiences over 4-years old throughout the day during the period October-December 1992.

　　The data indicates that the percentage of radio listeners started at 8% at 7am and increased substantially before 8:00 am, when the percentage amounted to a peak of 27%. The percentage then declined steadily to 11% at 4:00 pm, which was followed by a slight increase to 15% at 5:00 pm. However, from then on, there was again a gradual decrease to 2% until 4:00 am, when the percentage bottomed out. The period from 4:00 am to 6:00 am saw another slight rise to 4% in radio listeners.

　　Similarly, the percentage of TV viewers went up from 6:00 am to 8:30 am, when there was a leveling off at 8% for the next one hour and a half. After a slight decrease, the percentage rose sharply to 15% between 12 pm and 2 pm with surpassing that of Radio in 1 pm, before it dropped slightly. The peak (45%) was reached at 8:00 pm after a massive rise from 14% since 3:00 pm. However, the period between 8:00 pm and 3:00 am saw a slump in television viewers. The percentage reached the bottom of 3% at 3:00 am, when there was a slight rise afterwards.

　　In conclusion, the popularity of Radio was higher in the morning while the reverse was true for TV at night.

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三、雅思小作文解析及范文:男女吸烟者的比例

Task：The proportion of male and female smokers in Someland from 1960 to 2000.

　　思路解析：

　　1. 两条线，建议每条线一段;

　　2. 每条线的描述请参考经典折线写法;

　　3. 关键性数据不可少，如最大值，最小值等;

　　4. 本文用到了线段之间的对比关系，如文中的: 6 times of 和 smallest difference with，这些都是加分项.

　　参考范文：

　　The chart compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between 1960 and 2000. Overall, the proportion of smoking for both is currently declining and fewer women smoked throughout the period.

　　Initially, the peak of male rate was reached in 1960, when it was 600 in every 1000, over 6 times of that of females. This number then decreased gradually to 500 by 1975 and continued to decrease but more steeply to 250 by 2000, which had the smallest difference with the level of women.

　　Oppositely, the rate of smoking in women in 1960 was the lowest at only 90 in every 1,000. By 1965 this increased to 180, followed by a sharper rise to 320 by 1975. The rate of female smokers then remained stable at 320 until 1980 at which point the figure began to decline and ended up at 200 by 2000.

　　In conclusion, the rate of smoking in men dropped straightly throughout the whole period while the figure of women smokers went through a fluctuation.

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四、雅思小作文解析及范文:中国和美国的出生率变化

Task：The changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000.

　　思路分析：

　　1. 两条线，建议每条线一段;

　　2. 每条线的描述请参考经典折线写法;

　　3. 关键性数据不可少，如最大值，最小值等;

　　参考范文：

　　The graph demonstrated some striking similarities between the Chinese and the US birth rates from 1920 to 2000.

　　The birth rates in China rose from 10% in 1920 to 15% in 1935. Later, the figure plunged to a low of 5% in the 1940s and was followed by an exponential growth to the peak of 20% in 1950. Next, the fertility rate dropped sharply to 8% in the following five years. Finally, the figure declined gradually to 3% during the latter half of the century.

　　Meanwhile, the US had similar birth rate of 12% to that of China in 1920. The figure fluctuated in between 12% and 14% during 1920s and 1930s until it hit a low of 4% in 1945. Five years later, the birth rate reached a peak at 15% in 1950 but it made a steady fall to the final figure of around 7% in 2000.

　　Overall, both countries experienced considerable fluctuations in the similar period with some lows during the 1940s and some highs during the 1930s.

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