【雅思写作】雅思大作文（3）

【老师语料库】

1. Happiness lies，first of all，in health. 健康是幸福人生的本源。

2. vegetarians = those who are keen on eating vegetables or fruits n素食主义者

3. vegetarians =people who consciously avoid the intake of meat n素食主义者

4. is the only way = is the sole method v 是唯一的方式

5. keep healthy = keep fit = embark on a healthier lifestyle = have a wholesome lifestyle v保持健康

【范文赏析】

[首段]：背景介绍+作家立场

Happiness lies，first of all，in health. Health enables us to brave career challenges energetically and harmonize family life optimistically. The awareness of a healthier lifestyle has been making numerous people alter their dietary habits, which explains the increase of vegetarians. My stand is that to eat fruits and vegetables might be an effective way in terms of keeping fit，however，it is not the best and only strategy.

【解析】 My stand is that = my firm conviction is that =to voice my opinion 我认为……

【拓展】 in terms of 在……的方面;就……而言

[二段]：让步段

Indeed, I have to concede that people who consciously avoid the intake of meat can, to some extent, help them embark on a wholesome lifestyle. More precisely, vegetarian eating habit helps people avoid excessive intake of sugar, fat and calorie. Meanwhile, rich nutrients and vitamins are contained in plenty of fruits and vegetables. What I want to rebut, however, is that too much consumption of fruits and vegetables might result in the imbalance of nutritional value

【解析】 embark on a wholesome lifestyle v开始健康的生活方式

【拓展】 What I want to rebut, however, is that…… 然而，我想反驳的是……