雅思小作文解析及范文（二）

二、雅思小作文解析及范文:印尼不同海龟的种群数量

Task：The population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.

　　思路解析：

　　1. 按照每条线一段进行分组;

　　2. 重点描述关键数据: 最大值，最小值，交点等;

　　3. 需要呈现明显的线段形状，如：数据不变，线段平行，剧烈的上升或下跌。

　　参考范文：

　　The line chart indicates the change of population of different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012.

　　The total number of all species of turtles in India has been relatively stable over the last two decades, although there were significant drops in numbers between 1987 and 1989 and again in 1992 and 1996. Since 2004 there has been an improvement in numbers of all species, although the graph shows a slight decrease in 2010.

　　In contrast, the population of Leather back turtles has suffered a severe decline, particularly in 1988 when numbers fell dramatically. The rate of decline in the population appears to have slowed and it has remained relatively stable since 2009.

　　There was also a fall in the number of Green turtles of around 30% between 1984 and 2002. The population increased slightly in 2010 but it had dropped again by 2012.

　　It is only Olive Ridley turtles that have seen a steady increase in population over this period. Their numbers dropped slightly in 2007 and again in 2012 but the overall trend has been a positive one.

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三、雅思小作文解析及范文:不同国家的国际旅游者信息

Task：The information about international tourist arrivals in five countries.

　　思路解析：

　　1. 五条线，故必须进行分组：时间内数据始终较多的分一组，数据相对较少的分一组;

　　2. 注意关键数据的描述：最大值，最小值，交点等;

　　3. 需要呈现明显的线形，如平行，稳定不变，剧烈上升或下跌。

　　参考范文：

　　The graph shows the overall numbers of tourist arrivals in five countries between 1995 and 2010.

　　In 1995 over 70 million tourists visited the United States, more than twice as many as the next most popular destination shown, France. However, between 2005 and 2010 there was a decrease of approximately 1,500,000 in the numbers going to the United States whereas there was an increase of nearly 20 million tourists visiting France. The result was that in 2010 the number of tourists arriving in the United States and France was almost equal at around 90 million each.

　　The number of tourists visiting Malaysia rose steadily over the whole period but by 2010 the total was still under 50 million. The countries with the fewest tourist arrivals were Brazil and Egypt. The number of tourists going there was similar between 1995 and 2000 but after that there was a greater increase in tourists going to Egypt than to Brazil.

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四、雅思小作文解析及范文:美国能源消耗

Task：Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.

　　思路解析：

　　1. 分段原则为：相同趋势的分在同一段落，具体为：最主要的能源一段，次重要的能源一段，最不重要的能源一段。

　　2. 由于线段过多，所以线段的描述尽量简洁，只描述最重要的特征(Max,Min,上升，下降，波动，交点)，其他数据一律不写。

　　3. 不用每条线都描述，只重点描述几条线的共性。

　　4. 注意句式的多样性，即动词表达和名词表达的交替使用。

　　参考范文：

　　The graph shows consumption of energy in the U.S. since 1980 with projections through 2030.

　　The historical trends show Petrol and Oil as the major sources of fuel, rising from 35 quadrillion units used in 1980 to 42 quadrillion in 2012. Despite some fluctuation between 1980 and 1995, there was a steady increase, which is expected to continue, reaching 47 quadrillion in 2030.

　　Consumption of energy from natural gas and coal followed a similar pattern over the period. From 20 quadrillion and 15 quadrillion respectively in 1980, gas showed an initial fall and coal a gradual increase, with the two fuels equal between 1985 and 1990. Consumption has fluctuated since 1990 but both now provide 24 quadrillion. Coal consumption is projected to rise to 31quadrillion in 2030, whereas after 2014, natural gas is forecast to remain stable at 25 quadrillion.

　　In 1980, energy from solar/wind, nuclear, and hydropower was the least-used, with only 4 quadrillion. Nuclear has risen by 3 quadrillion, and solar/wind by 2. Since 2005, hydropower has fallen back to the 1980 figure. It is expected to remain approximately constant through 2030, while the others are projected to rise gradually after 2025.

　　Overall, fossil fuels will remain the chief energy source for the US, with a little bit of hydroelectric, nuclear and a smidgen of renewables like wind and solar.

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